literature

The Sky is Down

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A lamppost sways,
Side to side,
As tires splash,
While whizzing by,
The clouds go grey,
And greyer still,
And rain attacks,
My windowsill.

Leaves they fall,
Spinning ‘round,
Umbrellas up,
But inside out,
Hoods pulled tight,
As faces frown,
The weather sucks,
The sky is down.
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Tools: Microsoft Word
Notes: Feeling a little crappy, like the weather is right now...

Warning: This looks fine on my laptop, please let me know if there is a problem.
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BlackenHearts666's avatar
I wish I could rhyme like that. When I do it, it always sounds so cheesy. T.T
And...Lampposts "sway"? Hurricane type winds? O.o
I love it, but the use of the word "sucks" kind of took from it a wee bit. Other than than, good job, Love. ^^ *hug*