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How could I say a sincere sorry,
To a man who means the world to me,
And if I hurt you enough to say sorry,
What good would an apology be?

I guess I could climb a tall ladder,
And take the stars down from the sky,
Then I could wrap them in a lovely box,
And give them to my perfect guy.

Or maybe an ocean would be better,
Made from my regretful tears,
And when I give it to you I can say,
I see us together for years.

I could give you some soil from the garden,
Since I can't give you the whole earth,
And maybe then you would see,
How much I think you are worth.

But when all is said and done,
No apology would ever do,
And hopefully these few words will be helpful,
Cause baby I do love you!
©2006-2009 =AngelicRuin
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Author's Comments

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Tools: Microsoft Word
Notes: This is a commission piece

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:iconselfdestructingangel:
aww that is such a sweet poem

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I'm On Top Of The World..Who Thinks I Should Jump?
:iconkayogi:
Oh, I love the idea of saying sorry without actually saying it. :3
My favorite part was the ladder going up to take stars from the sky...I would love to do that.

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:iconangelicruin:
thank you

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Thank you for sharing your art, I hope you have a nice day!

*ElectronicRainbow is GOD!

"Define Interesting"
"Oh god, oh god, we're all going to die?"
:iconangelicruin:
Thank you honey! :heart:

I'm glad you like it, I like that part too, had a dream about it once!

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Thank you for sharing your art, I hope you have a nice day!

*ElectronicRainbow is GOD!

"Define Interesting"
"Oh god, oh god, we're all going to die?"
:iconblackenhearts666:
Aw, it's so romantic. I just love it. The garden soil in place of the earth; stars instead of other cool shiny things; an ocean of tears. It's all truly romantic. Gods, why can't I write like you? I want to write romantically.

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-They judge us by our exoskeleton not by the decaying organs inside our stained red bones
-Not by the words that are produced by the grey matter in between our ears
:iconmurderdoll089:
Wow....this is just great.Just perfect for the mood I'm in right now.Great job hun :hug:
:+fav: This is my first poem from my favourites list. :D

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Don't hate me because I take better pics that you...oh,and I'm prettier too :flirty:
:iconangelicruin:
Wow hehe, thank you! I seem to write much better when I have been comissioned, lord knows why.

Anyhoo, glad you like it babe!

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Thank you for sharing your art, I hope you have a nice day!

*ElectronicRainbow is GOD!

"Define Interesting"
"Oh god, oh god, we're all going to die?"
:iconangelicruin:
Ohh then I am honoured!

I'm really glad you like it, even commissioned poetry is close to my heart, so it means a lot when people read it, let alone like it!

And thank you for both favs!

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Thank you for sharing your art, I hope you have a nice day!

*ElectronicRainbow is GOD!

"Define Interesting"
"Oh god, oh god, we're all going to die?"
:iconkayogi:
You're welcome. :D

Ooh that must've been a real nice dream.

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